– ezorenier @ deviantart

as I wake up
I ask myself
why I am immobile
I see my wound
feel so fresh
why haven’t a scar
formed yet

I pause and think
scar would be better
than a
discharging wound
a scar heals completely
while oozing has a
long way to go

again I hope for
the discharge
to stop
random thoughts
make me
feel discouraged
painting me
as a failure

I wish
I had a scar
to show
I am double strong
to prove
the battle is over
so I can sing
my victory song
survival of the dead

Linking up with MLMM Photo Challenge #225

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20 thoughts on “scar

      1. I’m doing better ! Wasn’t well last couple of weeks !
        Also, words are being reluctant to flow so struggling, however trying to get back !
        I really needed to read this, it just puts many things into perspective, I’m glad I visited today ! 🙂

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      1. Hahha.. Not excellent. Will be glad to share what i know.. Actually the word scar will be more beautiful and profound in tamil than english.. That’s why said .. Deepa will teach u deep for sure.

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