I thought
the kitchen was the best
but aroma disturbed me
then settled to my balcony
but eyes grazed the crowd
I thought
the park would be perfect
but the emotions stirred deep
and saddened me further
finally found a place of peace
uninterrupted and serene
because no one dares me here
when ideas trigger me
I make an excuse
and rush to the hole
I sit on top of it
with my legs dangling
in water cold
I love this place
because ideas donβt just
happen in certain places
they happen at
certain times
in the loo too
(99 words)
#amwriting #poetry #love #life #syncwithdeep
Oh yes ……they always doπ
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hehheh.. thank u sakshi
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My pleasure π
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Haha! A good one Deepa π
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hehehhee
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Haha, every single time ! π
loved it
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ehheehhe
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Nice !!
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Ultimately all within. Happens when it happens.
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On the loo, yes. But feet dangling in cold water? π
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yea.. try immersing your feet in water and see the nirvana.. it is peace:)))
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This sounds like an epic workplace indeed, except I would forego the feet dangling in cold water and the inevitable ring around the behind. Haha! Very funny.
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Thank u charli
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And I have a great water-proof notepad for such instances! Great use of humor and situation, Deepa!
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Thank u so much charli..
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Best hiding place, away from the children.
….Until they stand by the door and start up a conversation!
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hahhah.. my son uses this opportunity too. as u said, he build a conversation standing outside my heaven
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They are way too smart!
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