scribbling on a paper
inked with the first couplets
tapered ends, plain lines
my words ran dry
like a drought in the desert
the lines faint
ending abruptly
leaving a void
my pen stands still after a while
emotions run wild
yet my words confine
blanks give
space for thoughts
for the fire within me
is still unwrought
to concoct
the emotions unwritten
maybe
I will leave it half written
my emotions run wild
yet my words confine!
Nice, but too long.
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Hahhah.. I enjoyed this comment
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Sharing post by Deepa at syncwithdeep, while at the cafe –
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Thank you Eugenia ♥️ ♥️ ♥️
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My pleasure!
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Very nice, and not too long. 🙂 Beautiful flow addressing emotions. I hope your pen never stands still, Deepa. Thank you for joining in.
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😀 😀 😀.. 🙏🙏🙏
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🙂
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Your words are quite lovely and echo what many of us experience.
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Thank you Patricia💖
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Beautiful… Sharing.
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Thank you ❤️
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This is so relatable dear and so very well expressed 👏👏👏😊
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Thank you Yasmin ❤️
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Thank you Eugenia
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