rushing
panting
speeding
across each other
in wheels of four
or two
or sometimes
on foot
running out of breath
in this endless race
to nowhere
with no winners
checkpoints
at red light
sometimes…
now, I know why
the hundred thousand
thoughts
inside my head
rushing
panting
speeding
across each other
seems normal
to others…
Brilliant! I will now see the exasperating traffic as thoughts running thorugh my head. Maybe it becomes tolerable 🙂 Thanks for joining in!
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Thank u Reena.. Glad to be back with your prompt as the ice breaker
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So very welcome!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Pregnant Pause ….. by Deepa
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WOW…I am, as always, awed by your writing, Deepa ❤ Much love to you ❤
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Thank u
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Most welcome ❤
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Wowza! I missed you! Thank you for following BrewNSpew! 😊
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Actually I never u followed. But I could not get your updates.. So had to search u.. And then did unfollow to follow back, Eugenia..
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I’ve had followers and those I follow disappear. I was informed it is a WordPress glitch.
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Oh.. I had been away nearly for three months.. So I thought my following was all messed up.. I had to recall the names and search one by one.. Thx Eugenia for the info
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I am glad you’re back. You writing is lovely.
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